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Old 23-03-2008, 04:40 AM
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Cindy,

I was an English teacher for 13 years, and I appreciate your poem, both for its content and its language. I like it, especially some specific word combinations that really "strike a chord" with me, if you will pardon the pun!
the instrument within me

the note's liquid movement

the fragile tones of mood

Composing a life

an inner realm to sing with

My soul, my song, my instrument

Beautiful! Thank you for sharing this poem. It makes me hopeful...
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