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Old 08-09-2008, 05:06 AM
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Awesome Gravastorm! Very powerful stuff.
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Old 08-09-2008, 12:14 PM
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Thank you. It always feels a bit weird to share knowing that interpretations are as numerous as the stars in the sky. I can only hope the flotsam of my psyche does no harm.

BTW your Helium Poet was very intriguing.

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Old 09-09-2008, 07:20 AM
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Sorry about the link I forgot to uncheck the box.

More of my writings can be found here: http://mywebpage.netscape.com/stormstarusa/index.html
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Old 23-09-2008, 08:17 AM
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Default The Loss of She

This is what PTSD means for me . . .

Tonight I weep and mourn the loss of me
I knew her
Tonight I weep and mourn the loss of She
She is gone
Tonight I weep and mourn the loss of me
One of light and love and grace
Tonight I weep and mourn the loss of She
She who knew me
She who loved me
She who kept me
She who danced over me
She who delighted in me
She is no more

Tonight I weep and mourn the loss of me
In death she is no more
Tears fall
Desperate tears fall
She cannot dry these tears which call
Tonight I weep and mourn the loss of words
Words I wish to implore
Simple words to flow
To honor
The loss of She
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Old 23-09-2008, 10:04 AM
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Well said my friend and :Hug_emo ticon: to you.

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Old 23-09-2008, 12:18 PM
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Shiraz,

I've felt like that many times before. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing it.

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Old 25-09-2008, 01:04 AM
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Default She Did Not Ask Me

I want her back
She did not ask me if I would be OK without her
I am not OK
She did not ask me if I would miss her
I do
She did not ask me if I would still like me
I don’t
She did not ask me if her leaving would grieve me
It does
She did not ask me if I could speak without her
I can’t
She did not ask me if I needed her courage
I do
She did not ask me if I could feel without her
I don’t
She did not ask me if my world would fall
It does
She did not ask me if I would miss her creativity
I miss her creativity so much
She did not ask me if I needed her brightness
I am dull
She did not ask me if I loved her
I should have

She did not ask me if she could leave
She just left and I wonder if I will see her again
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Old 25-09-2008, 05:40 PM
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Some days it just doesn't pay to engage my brain
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Old 26-09-2008, 03:52 AM
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Gravastorm, I tried to go to your web page but failed miserably to find your poems.
I really like them and resonate with them. They are everything I look for in a poem. I wish I could write like that. I also like the way you present them. VERY COOL!

Take care, Morgan
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Old 26-09-2008, 05:39 AM
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Gravastorm,

Awesome poem!! Keep them coming!

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